7 Step Copywriting Process
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1. Gather Initial Research
For starters, with all projects I ask that my clients take time to answer an initial, 25-point questionnaire. Their answers will provide some background information. I ask several questions from four main categories:
- The customer
- The product
- The business
- The offer
The first one is the most important. It’s where I ask questions like demographics and psychographics, and try to build a perfect customer profile
or persona. The others include things like features and benefits,
stories behind the product, testimonials, actual results, the buying
process, etc.
(The questionnaire can be an eye-opener for many clients because it
forces them to dig for the answers, and to see where some of the flaws
with their current copy are.)
Admittedly, this is just a start. But their answers, which give me
some direction as to where to conduct further research, give me at
least a basic understanding of their business, the purpose of the
copy’s message, and its goals.
Yes, that’s “goals” in the plural.
Of course, there is the main goal, which may be to generate leads or
sales. But other, secondary goals may include to dispel rumors, answer
questions, build credibility, eliminate misconceptions, differentiate
from the competition, etc.
2. Conduct Exploratory Research
Then, I read and study the answers carefully, and I conduct some
exploratory research. That is, I try to gather as much information as I
can — anything about the business, the product, the offer and, above
all, the target audience.
I surf their websites. I research their competitors. I look at some
of the trends in that particular product category, market, or industry.
I do comparative analyses.
I hang out where their readers hang out. I check out some of the
websites they visit. I spend some time in forums in which they’re
active. I try to get a grasp of their language, their challenges, their
industry, their fears, their goals, etc.
When I come across an important piece of information, I copy it into
a document, where I can easily append extra pieces of information,
include any corresponding URLs, make additional notes, and more.
I create a new project in my project management software, where I give access to all the key players, and start populating it with the information I gather.
(Aside from being a repository, the software has many features that
come in quite handy, such as to-do lists, message board, whiteboard,
chat room, file uploads, milestone tracker, and more.)
The idea at first is to gather as much information as possible,
including facts, features, data, results, etc. I undiscerningly add
whatever information I find into the repository.
3. Pick, Prod And Probe Further
Of course, a lot of it is also irrelevant.
So I go through the information and pull out the important stuff. I
compile, clarify, and expand. I cherrypick and highlight what’s
relevant, and file or discard the rest.
I might even repeat some of the earlier steps to make sure I’ve
covered all the bases. After spending some time studying the
information, I may ask for more clarification and dig deeper.
Sometimes, it’s to get a better understanding of the information.
Other times, it’s to get additional tidbits where I might uncover
hidden gems I can use with the copy.
But most of the time, it’s to be able to later put what my clients
tell me into words that specifically meet my client’s audience at their level.
I tend to look at my job as “connecting the dots.” If the product is
good and the demand is there, then my job is not to sell the product
but to connect the desires and fears of the reader with the solution my
client offers.
(Most of my clients are too “married” to their own products or
businesses that they tend to be removed from their clients. So what
they may feel is great about their product may not be a shared opinion
among their target market.)
But here’s my greatest tip…
Some of the best answers I get are in fact obtained while
interviewing people. That’s right: actually talking to people, whether
it’s the business owner or existing clients. In other words, picking up
the phone and asking questions.
(Of course, I record everything and transcribe the interviews. I do this with the help of an online transcription service.)
This allows me to not only catch verbal cues and innuendos, but also
to prod and probe further. I sometimes throw in a dangling preposition
or conjunction followed by a pause, where the silence compels them to
continue.
(For example, once my client answers a question, I’ll say, “And?”
“Or?” “But?” “So that…” “That’s for…” “That means…” “Or else?” “In
other words?” After that, I shut up. You’d be amazed by the kinds of
answers they would give!)
I also try to speak with actual success stories. I
interview satisfied clients, not just for the sake of gathering
testimonials, and not just to ask a lot of open-ended questions to
probe deeper as well, but also, and if I can, to actually get them to sell me on the product themselves.
These interviews are worth a mint! If I managed to get my
interviewee excited and passionate about the product, in many cases
they practically write the copy for me.
4. Create The Structure
Next, I try to find a storyline, a unique benefit, a certain angle,
or a key piece of information. Some call it a “platform.” Others call
it a “hook” or “the big idea.” It’s essentially the one element on
which the entire copy hinges.
It may be a certain fear, a news story, a “hot button,” a success
story, a fascinating factoid, a sensational claim, a major benefit
(even an unsought one), a sense of urgency, a “lie dispelled,” a
secret, a myth, a hot trend, a controversial topic, an unexpected
result, etc.
Once I’ve found it, I then create an outline. Often, I apply my QUEST formula,
which is to “qualify” the reader, “understand” their problem, “educate”
them on the solution, “stimulate” them on the value, and “transition”
them into a buyer.
I don’t write the copy just yet. I simply use the formula to create
an outline that will guide me as to where specific pieces of
information will be added.
The copy doesn’t necessarily have to follow the exact formula,
either. But it does give me some guidance as to what exactly I must
cover, and where I must cover it.
Sometimes, I’ll use it to create headers throughout the copy as the
outline. These headers are not written in stone. They only give me some
initial direction as to what, specifically, I need to cover at certain
points in the copy.
Look at these headers as “guideposts,” if you will.
I also try to look at the copy from the perspective of a reader. For example, I’ll ask myself, “What do I want and
need to know at this point in the copy?” “What can potentially confuse
me?” “What questions or objections might likely come up at that
moment?” “What’s going through my mind when I read this?” And so on.
(At this time in the process, I write some notes on the copy, to
myself, on what needs to be covered, what key pieces of information I
must include, what ideas I want to expand on, etc. And often, I write
these notes in point form.)
5. Write The Copy
Next comes the creative part.
From the platform and the guideposts I’ve set out above, I start
writing the copy. I often begin with the headline or the bullet points,
whichever is easiest. (It really depends on what comes to mind the
fastest.)
Sometimes, a headline idea jumps out at me, particularly after doing
the research and coming up with the “hook.” If so, I will start with
the headline first.
The headline is not final, either. I sometimes come back and rewrite
the headline once I finish the copy, because new and better ideas
emerge later on as I write the body copy.
Both the headline and the storyline will give me a good indication
of what I can write about, how to say it, as well as what options I
have when I write it.
Sometimes, I just start writing and let it flow, and my writing
takes a life of its own. When this happens, sometimes I end up ignoring
the guideposts I’ve created. If so, that’s perfectly fine. Remember,
they are guides. Not goals.
In terms of actual copy, I start writing and expanding.
- I structure a skeletal offer (with premiums);
- I create the opening or introductory paragraph;
- I tell the story (based on the chosen storyline);
- I list the features, advantages and benefits;
- I expand on key items for the main body;
- I incorporate or expand on story blocks;
- I add Johnson boxes, remarks or sidenotes;
- I reinforce key benefits and “reasons why;”
- I build up the value and expand on the offer;
- I form a logical and believable sense of urgency;
- I inject credibility by adding proof elements;
- I infuse testimonials in appropriate locations;
- I write the guarantee (or guarantees);
- I close with a call-to-action statement;
- And I plug some “PS’s” at the end.
(In the P.S., I add an afterthought to restate the benefits of the
offer, repeat the topic covered in the headline, emphasize the sense of
urgency, or add an extra bonus not yet offered.)
6. Rearrange The Flow
Then, I rearrange the content for flow.
I don’t edit the copy. I simply scan the copy to make sure it all
flows nicely, and that the organization of ideas makes the reading
pleasant, compelling and easily understandable.
I make sure to integrate headers at every two or three paragraphs.
If needed, I also copy, paste and move blocks of text in locations I
feel they are more appropriate.
(For example, sometimes it’s better to credentialize the copy early
on. Or some testimonials are best located where specific objections may
come up. In fact, I use them where the reader might have a specific
question that the testimonial answers.)
To help me, I work with multiple, tiled windows (i.e., side by
side), all opened at once and each showing a different part of a same
document. This is particularly helpful when I’m working with longer
copy.
That way, I can easily scan and scroll through each window to
rearrange the content from one window to another (i.e., from one
section of the copy to another).
From this cursory look at the copy, I can immediately sense if I
need to also add certain elements, whether cosmetic (such as adding a
grabber, a picture or a graphic) or tactical (such as adding a
sidenote, a proof element or a Johnson box).
I also make sure that the copy follows the AIDA formula (i.e., attention, interest, desire and action).
7. Edit And Expand
Once re-arranged, I then edit the copy. I read it to myself, slowly
and sometimes out loud, to make sure it’s easy to read and flows
properly. If I stumble at any point or verbally struggle, I know that I
need to rewrite that section.
(Whenever I can, I even record myself. It’s amazing how many errors
I’ve discovered from listening to myself reading the copy, than from
simply reading it.)
I then expand, cut out, tighten up and add more. I add emphasis
where needed, rewrite certain sections, and, above all, cut out as much
of the extra fat as possible.
In fact, the latter is the most crucial step.
Why? Because when I write, I usually write with abandon. I let it
all flow. I write like I speak. I try not to stop myself, or else it
will impede my train of thought.
(When I stop writing, it forces me to start thinking critically. I
begin to edit myself too early, which blocks the creative flow. When
this happens, I lose focus because I spend too much energy on making
sure I’ve said things right rather than saying the right things.)
That’s why I wait until after I’m done, and only when I’m done, to
go back and excise all the extraneous filler. I try to cut out as much
of the unneeded copy as I can. Or, if what I say is indeed important, I
try to find ways to say the same thing but in less words.
(Editing is probably one the most important strategies in writing
copy, but it’s also the most overlooked because it’s the hardest thing
to do for most copywriters. That’s why it’s best to wait until the end.)
Finally, I focus on the cosmetics, since certain visual “triggers”
help to increase both readership and response. So I touch up the
formatting, typestyles, tables, colors, graphics, pictures, layouts,
fonts, and so on.
After that, I’m done.
Revise, Revise, Revise!
Before I deliver the copy to my client, I still get my staff to
proofread it for me. But I don’t limit them to the grammar or style. I
also ask them to signal any part of the copy where they feel confused,
lost, or disinterested in the story.
(I also ask them questions about the copy to see if they truly
grasped some of its key elements. If their answers are not good enough,
I know I need to edit it more.)
This is important, since I often make the same mistakes I made while
writing it when reading it back to myself. Also, knowing what the copy
is all about can cause me to take what I say (or fail to say) for
granted, and accidentally skip over what may be confusing to others.
(Don’t discount having a fresh pair of eyes look at your copy for
you. Before handing off the copy to the client, try to get someone else
to read it for you.)
After it’s all done, I then upload it to my the project website for
my client to read and offer feedback. I revise the copy until the
client is satisfied. (In fact, I allow my clients two free revisions.)
There is no way to predict how well my copy will do. For some
clients, my work multiplies their response rates like gangbusters. But
for others, my copy turns out to be a downright dud.
Maybe it’s because the platform is wrong. Perhaps the headline is the bottleneck. I don’t know. The only way to know is to test.
But in my experience, when my copy failed it was largely because the
audience wasn’t targeted, or the offer wasn’t appropriate. And in
either case, the copy would have never sold well, no matter how good
the copy was.
Failure does happen. It happens to the best of us. But failure is
also an opportunity — an opportunity to learn, improve and grow. That’s
why I appreciate it when my clients keep me posted on their results.
(I trust a copywriter who failed and succeeded more than I do one who never failed at all.)
In fact, some clients prefer to keep me on a retainer after the
initial project, so they can have me rewrite parts of the copy, or
offer any suggestions on how to improve it, without contaminating the
initial control.
Nevertheless, these are the steps I follow. I don’t necessarily
follow them to the letter all of the time. But hopefully, they have
given you some fodder on your quest for better response.
About the Author
Michel Fortin is a direct response copywriter, author, speaker
and consultant. Spy on Michel by watching videos of him in action,
working with real copy from real clients, and get tested conversion
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